This is a floor plan (it doesnt really look like one though) hmm ... of my first flat and its living area which connects to the public space and communal open space ... is this enough detail? ... i dont think it says enough about border conditions ... what do you guys think? .. how can i make it more interesting? ...
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you need to add many many things yet.
1_you should have in fornt of you a good example of plan drawings. So you can really understand what is missing. (i.e. check Catalitic Formations from A.Rahim)
2_it is not clear the separation/border/relation between blob/flat/green. Like wich materials are you using, and then we shoudl see the difference on your drawings of tickness.... for different materials.
3_becuase your project have complex curved surface, we should see the projection of these curves (below and above with doted lines).
4_don't use too much greyscale to show a curved wall but draw it with lines.
It is a good start but keep going. I really think you need an example so you can see how you can draw a plan of curved surfaces.
Posted by monia de marchi | May 13, 2007 8:12 PM
Posted on May 13, 2007 20:12