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almost there

b1AT.jpg

needs a bit more photoshop I think


balconfinal.jpg

do you think I should add people/greens for that one?

Comments (3)

natasha:

for top one - i'm not sure, but i think maybe TOO much of the street is now missing - so it makes your building looks like it's floating. Might change my opinion when i see it printed. Also add a couple of people on one of th balconies in top image. Love the bottom one - but think the image should end at the bottom with the balconies rather than with glass - looks like it's floating whereas if balconies are at the base of the image it will sit a bit better. definitely try to add people (greens I don't know - you can try but be sparing) but limit them to only 1 or 2 balconies so they don't overwhelm. would also be nice if glass is a bit more transparent. awesome.

monia de marchi:

agree with natasha's comment. yep top bit more street, so we can breathe a bit.
second image need more photoshop/contrast/material (yes better glass) more reflection. go with fake boxes (buildings like) for reflection that you will not see on the camera.
carefull with collages, keep it simple and limiteted. good good.
first one (ia m goign to say it again)we need: double amount of the street that you have.

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