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A
BZinn.jpg
Boriginal.jpg
the top one is scaled up because it has street details (lampposts etc.) and was too short.

according to blog comments:
B
b1sh.jpg
b1AT.jpg
the top one is a3 (for Jury can become 'real' A2)
bottom one is spread A3 + collaged the details from the street (lamposts etc.) and because of that had to scale the block up (it was too short)...

C
bash.jpg
balconfinal.jpg

1. which format/pozition for A/B?
2. shall I skip for the street details in order to get more of the block, and by that not to scale them up?
3. is C btr as the new A3 version? (will rerender it tonight with more reflection and transparent things.)
for the jury I can print a 'real' A2 - but for my portfoliio it's either A3 or spred A3

Comments (3)

natasha:

Whether or not you put in street details like lamposts etc, you ALWAYS paste in your building so it's the right scale. The difference between the 2 images is too great - and in the top one of the 2nd set of iamges the building looks way too small.

1st set the top image looks more accurately scaled, and therefore more believable.

in the 3rd set of images the top image looks best but also because the base of the images has the balconies rather than the glass, like in the lower one. The lower one you should also just adjust so the base of image sits on the balconies. both will be great.

monia de marchi:

image A:
you cropped to much the first so i prefer the second one
image B:
the second one was perfect, now you have too much street and sky... just bring the file on tuesday so we cropped on the right place
image C:
i like more the second if it starts on the bottom with baclonies instead of glass (like Natasha said). hmmm i think you didn't understand the comment. Bring the files tuesday.
they all three looks good, they need to be more perfect/accurate/beautiful... as composition of the image

natasha sandmeier:

last comment (i think) with regards to this set of images. I was looking at them and realized that actually the only one that works well as an image is the top one of the 3rd set (the closeup of the balconies. The other ones it just seems like you're cropping and sizing the image based on paper size rather than on whatever size your IMAGE should be. Whether is sits on an A2 or sits on 2 wide A3's, the image size should be EXACTLY WHAT YOU NEED IT TO BE, rather than fit to page, scale to page, fit building to page, etc etc. Put the building on the site (accurately scaled) then crop your image so it is PRECISELY, EXACTLY, AND PERFECTLY proportioned, composed, and colour toned for that particular rendering. THEN, and only then, figure out how to lay it out on your pages. This will resolve all this bad cropping and weird sizing.

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