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Comments (2)
cool.
but where is it? looks like it's on the another planet :)
Posted by sayaka | May 30, 2007 1:57 PM
Posted on May 30, 2007 13:57
hi kevin - your building is looking good in this one (like some of the others you showed as well in the previous entries). Think the sun/moon whatever it is with the swirly bits is too graphically prominant in the image so it takes away too much attention from your building. Also, i would try to correct the leaning towers in the background and straighten them up a bit. Remember that your building is what should be keeping attention so make sure to apply most detail there. Lastly, in the background buildings illuminated floors are rendered as yellow but in your building it looks as though no lights are on - be consistant.
Posted by natasha | June 1, 2007 5:11 PM
Posted on June 1, 2007 17:11