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hmmm

I got tired of modeling, so I was playing with collage.
something is still wrong...

edited-render5-ed3.jpg

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monia de marchi:

1_people are a bit too transparent
2_don't put people rught in middle front (like the guy)
3_the tree looks completely fake, a way is to include grass in that area of your render. it is strange adn i think maybe take one a bit simpler in shape
4_the background: don't make it transparent. now it looks like that there are building in the middle of a desert (it doesn't looks like LA hills). Also the scale is wrong. one of ur unit looks massive compare with the building in backgorund. you need more close up to the background wiht some buildings or your units and bit less sky. Do some test...looks really promising!


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