TAREK

prefer brightness of building in this one as opposed to previous - but think your frescoes are too bright as they compete with your people. people still too saturated and bright yellow. top images is really good. wouldn't mind a bit of sun 'cascading' down a part of the stairs (i see a bit of sun on the left side - would be great with a bit more...) but it's v good.

book too.

yes. book is good too!

i have to say i really like this series of images - you just need to strike balance between showing the project and describing your scene. In the lower of the 2 images, the group overwhelms - i mentioned before the saturation, but they're also floating so need some shadows casting on to your surface. colour tone between people and fresco should be different. ie, real vs. painted. top image has good balance - 'real' figures more dull than painting.

so, can you also do another rendering this week of one of your public gathering spaces, a chapel, or even the interior courtyard. give it a whirl. would be good to have a range of spaces rendered - and not just the units.

i like the top one
second one not to crazy about it. i think i would liek much more to take pic of actual procession, something more contemporary and collage it. So it looks less collage of different periods. just an idea